Try again

Gotta love using photos as a tool!  Looked at this one after I'd posted it yesterday and went back and made some corrections.  It's better, yes?  Not wonderful, but better.  

The next one I was working on, and finished yesterday, was of an orange trumpet vine, again from my backyard.  

One of the problems I'm seeing, working small like this, is that I need to simplify my backgrounds.  It's all a learning process, but I think this next one looks too overworked.  And I think it needs to be more flower, less background.

What do you think?